Sunday, April 21, 2013

A Work of Art!


 To this day I have always felt that majority of the times I write, I’m thinking of what to write to make my paper stand out from the rest. Always thinking that this sentence I am about to come up with will make my essay pop like a firework, almost as if someone were to look at this line, they would say “Right here is what makes this paper.” As if the sentence was highlighted in their minds. When I look back to see how I have came about this amazing line, it is a horrible constructed roller coaster that no one could ever survive. Ups, with many downs, and twists and turns that seem never ending.
         With sharp turns and loops that will make your headshake like a bobble head is what I feel every time I write a paper. Making many changes to it to make it a smooth roller coaster so when a person climbs on for a ride, they will not have to make deals with god to spare his life. This process always seems like the hardest. I will bust out words so easily that makes it look like running water. Only problem is that all of it is in the wrong spot making this a bumpy ride that no one will ever forget. This is why people always say practice makes perfect. I always think that the process will become easier and easier that one day I will look like a professional athlete.
         Finally, it’s the time to take the roller coaster of my mind apart and piece it all together the right way. While looking at my final rough draft, I seem to have everything where it should go. Piece by piece I move along building the roller coaster hoping maybe this will be the most spectacular rollercoaster any one will ever seen!

1 comment:

  1. This one is probably the best of the three that I'm commenting on. I like the roller coaster metaphor. I for one can agree that I wouldn't want to get on a crazy poorly built ride haha. Good job!

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