Just play

My topic for this argumentative essay is concussions in sports. I agree that parents should let their children play regardless of the dangers of concussion rates. My thesis statement is "Parents should let their kids play sports regardless of concussion rates if the parents and coaches take the necessary steps for the children’s safety." My arguments that I plan to use to back my thoughts are overweight, more dangers than just concussions, More safe if taught the proper way to play the sports, and many more. I think I have a pretty good grasp of this topic. I also have a lot of info on both sides so it should be a breeze.